- Name: Claymore - Age: 27 Mobian Years - Gender: Male - Sexual Orientation: Straight - Marital Status: Single - Mate: None - Alignment: Unknown - Class: Power - Team: Holoskan Rebellion - Group Affiliations: Holoskan Royal Familiy, Holoskan Rebels. - Date of Birth: December 4th - Birthplace: Holoska Palace - Current Residence: Holoska Rebel camp - Occupation: Rebellion - Personal Quote: - Species: Arctic Wolf - Nationality: Caucasian/Mobian - Height: 3'2" - Weight: 62 lbs - Eye Color: Gold - Fur Color: Light blue fur, dark blue mane and soft white fur on chest, belly, muzzle and inner ears. - Clothing Style: a long black coat, white gloves, and black boots. - Jewelry: He has a shackle and chain on his left wrist. - Scars/Markings: none - Powers/Skills: He has superb swordsmen skills and leadership skills. - Attitude: Rumors would say that Claymore is a heartless, greedy monster, but he really isn't. Under his tough exterior is a big softy. He fights for the people of Holoska, even labled a criminal, he stands up against the government believing his own father is a tyrant. He is thoughtful and kind even though he doesn't often show it. He would die to protect the ones he loves and does not fear death. He is loyal and loving, and would stand beside you no matter what. After Claymore protested his father's decisions and assembled a rebellion, he was thrown in prision and was wrongly labeled a monster. He was emotionaly scarred Through all the hate and pain, and became a tough Guy he is known today. - Favorite Foods: he isn't picky and would eat almost any food. - Religion: no preference. - Likes: the snow, cool breeze, swordplay, his people, kids, listening to music, writing - Dislikes: government, his father, tyranny, the holskan military, greed - Fears: he fears Holoska being destroyed and falling to tyranny, losing the ones he loves.
STORY
Think of Claymore as an older, darker, bader version of Lance.
When Lance and Autumn travel through Holoska, they get stuck in the crossfire of a civil war. There, Lance meets his true father, the Kaiser of Holoska Garrett the Wolf. Overwhelmed by joy, the long lost son of Holoska returns to the royal family. Lance reunites with his Mother and Father for the first time in 18 years when he was separated as an infant. However, there was one last family member unaccounted for...
The rebellion against Garrett is led by Lance's older brother, Claymore the Wolf. By what Garrett tells him, Lance believes that Claymore is fueled by hatred and greed, and wants to control all of Holoska, and then presumably the world. Claymore has formed a rebelian force to overthrow Garrett. However, when Lance confronts his older brother, it seems that Claymore is working to free the people of Holoska from the tyrant that is his own father...
Now stuck in the middle, Lancer and Autumn must choose a side, or else all of Holoska will be destroyed by the civil war...
Who is right? Who is wrong? Who is the true evil of Holoska?
Claymore seems to be a very... mixed up individual, if I may. He wants to help the people he loves, though he seems to be "cruel" on the outside- which is kind of like pushing people away (almost). It's strange how he loves and hates at the same time, and it's obvious that he is at a kind of war with himself- not just his father. And poor Lance, stuck in the middle of it all. I'm sure he wants to help his brother, but he wants to understand his long lost parents as well. This story is amazing, and if you ever wrote it out/drew it (comic), I would read it. It's very good~
And poor Lance, stuck in the middle of it all. I'm sure he wants to help his brother, but he wants to understand his long lost parents as well.
This story is amazing, and if you ever wrote it out/drew it (comic), I would read it. It's very good~
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